Notes from Critique: Overall effects toned down. Aim for more contrast. More subtle effects in icons. Think about highlights; green coupled with gradients, distract. Layout of media good, more contrast on scrubber. Nav section colors good on step by step, Utilize colors an make more readable. More subtlety in textures.
I like the colors used but can use a little more contrast. I feel that the icons in the apps bar are way too big. The volume and temperature slots in adjustment bar might look better if they are of the same height. Try giving a consistent padding all around. Also, icons on top right in navigation module seem a bit lost without any frame or outlines.
I do see that you shrunk the size of icons on status bar and adjustment bar and it works so much better than the in-progress mockup. I think you can shrink size of your app bar a bit more. Also, think about consistency of each icons. (size and spacing) Great Job!
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ReplyDeleteOverall effects toned down. Aim for more contrast. More subtle effects in icons. Think about highlights; green coupled with gradients, distract. Layout of media good, more contrast on scrubber. Nav section colors good on step by step, Utilize colors an make more readable. More subtlety in textures.
I like the colors used but can use a little more contrast.
ReplyDeleteI feel that the icons in the apps bar are way too big.
The volume and temperature slots in adjustment bar might look better if they are of the same height. Try giving a consistent padding all around.
Also, icons on top right in navigation module seem a bit lost without any frame or outlines.
I do see that you shrunk the size of icons on status bar and adjustment bar and it works so much better than the in-progress mockup. I think you can shrink size of your app bar a bit more. Also, think about consistency of each icons. (size and spacing) Great Job!
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